Post by mrgoodkat on Jul 14, 2009 13:21:38 GMT -5
To be honest.....i got really bored with writting in my lair that is why i am right now bring to you! ONE! Of my short stories that delves in the universe as EVO.D (evolutionary Distruction)
THE STORY OF JACKY HOPPER
Evo. D. Comics
Current mood: awake
Category: Writing and Poetry
Evolutionary. Distruction. Comics
In biology, evolution is change in the genetic material of a population of organisms from one generation to the next. Though the changes produced in any one generation are small, differences accumulate with each generation and can, over time, cause substantial changes in the organisms. This process can culminate in the emergence of new species.[1] Indeed, the similarities between organisms suggest that all known species are descended from a common ancestor (or ancestral gene pool) through this process of gradual divergence.(thanks to wiki)
A Man wearing a light brown leather jacket a dark brown beret, old weathered gloves and steal toed boots walks alone down what appears to be a dark dirt road in the middle of the desert and all he can hear is the soft lullaby of a near by grasshopper.
The stars shine brightly above "Jackie my old friend after this we can finally retire....ha..haha.....hahaha" Jackie looks down and sees a fence at the end of the road... Jackie stands there for only a moment "Here we go again!"
Jackie Takes off running full sprint towards the fence and with what seems to be with no struggle leaps over the fence in such a graceful action he takes his time to bow "I would like to thank my parents....nah fuck that I did all the work...ha..haha...hahahah". "Cricket" Jackie looks down at the grasshopper "Race ya!"
Jackie takes off with the quickness only seen on TV and in comic books. Jackie Quickly drops and lays next to a wall as two soldiers walk by not even noticing him. "Cricket" Jackie looks up at the wall and to what seems to be the same grasshopper but Jackie brushes off the idea "Man they have an infestation!"
Jackie Springs up and bolts for a near by ventilation shaft with some quick moves with a screwdriver the vent is off and Jackie is down the the shaft "was it 32 levels or 23 levels down that i am appose to set the bomb again?" Jackie fumbles with his jacket pocket when he drops a piece of paper with his instructions on it "FUCK" Jackie drops down the shaft fallowing the piece of paper "Cricket" Jackie looks up as he falls spotting the same grasshopper.
With a load crash Jackie lands on the 23 floor alerting the near by guards "HALT OR WILL SHOOT" Jackie bolts towards them and as they start firing Jackie bounces off the wall in to a round off and lands in to a spinning sweep kick knocking the guards off their balance Jackie quickly grabs both their guns throwing them in either direction then fallows up with a double axe kick flip in to both of the guards heads killing them instantly with a quick flip up hes continues his dash down the halls. "Animals testing, No! Cybernetics, NO!" After a frustrated search Jackie takes a deep breath "Damn it it must have been the 32 second floor" He rushes to the vent system and continues downward to the 32 floor.
Jackie Reaches in to his pocket and pulls out a small round explosive he sets the timer then looks down and on the vent looking in to floor 32 Jackie spots the same grasshopper "Well you might have beat me here, you wont beat me out!" Jackie throws the bomb aiming for the grasshopper and takes off.
By the time Jackie hit the 28th floor the explosion had gone off and the place was filling up with a strange red-electric mist "Cough! What the fuck is this!" Jackie frantically rushes to get out of the building CRB "Alert... Alert... Chemical Breach closing emergency vents" "Shit!" Jackie rushes for the vent as it is closing and begins to pry it open with his screwdriver "FUCK!" He begins slamming his fist in to the metal vents and the metal gives in and he rushes threw quickly to the next vent busting it open with his bare hands "AHHHHHHHH"
CRB "Activating shut down of full facility" Jackie's heart starts pumping rapidly as what seems to be inhuman crawling threw the vents after him Jackie tears threw the vent and throws it at the animalistic beast gains in velocity in his direction. A large explosion erupts from a lower floor and fills the shaft with even more red-electric mist.
CRB "Chemical breach from sector 4532 to 4528, Emergency vent closure malfunction" Jackie looks ahead and sees the vents are now stuck open again and he quickly makes a dash for the exit hen the pressure of the building throws him out of the vent, Jackie lands a few 100 feet from the vent entrance "Cough! Cough!" Jackie Rolls over Covered in the Red-electric mist he catches his breath "Ha! I did it" as he begins to walk away he sees that same grasshopper chirping away as it has all night "Now to finish this" Jackie quickly and with much force place and a large amount of pressure crushes the grasshopper but instead of crushing the grasshopper the grasshopper stays strong and busts right threw his boots and in to his foot where a strange combination with Jackie's blood and the red-electric mist Causes an unexpected side effect to the Grasshopper.
With an explosion of force lifting Jackie off the ground the grasshopper begins spinning Jackie in the air at such a rapid rate that it tears Jackie's leg off the Grasshopper then continues to beat Jackie to death with his own leg.
In the moment of self panic the grasshopper looks at him self and with a strange sense of ones self and realized he had just killed some one the grasshopper now stands 3 ft tall much like a human but some what bug appearance surrounded in a puddle of Jackie's blood he checks jack for any possible inclination of who he might be when he finds his drivers license... He longingly looks at the ID and sees that it is clearly Jackie "Ja..ck..ie" He begins to well up with tears and a strange glow surrounds the grasshopper "AHHHHH!!!!!" the Grasshopper takes Jackie's Jacket Boxers and hat and takes off in to the sky!
:POK I HOPE YOU LIKED IT!!!!!!! PLEASE BE CRITICAL OF MY WORK!!!!!!!!!! Now i did write this some time ago and you can see my orginal posting of this on my myspace. Here is the link to my blog
blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.ListAll&friendId=72397577
And here is just for my ...myspace
www.myspace.com/arcticpresence_evilsoul
Please Comment i would like to hear what you think(*Lex thinking*....ummm now i am nerves...umm should i go back and proof read.....ummm no leave that for a later date....ummm ok well).
THE STORY OF JACKY HOPPER
Evo. D. Comics
Current mood: awake
Category: Writing and Poetry
Evolutionary. Distruction. Comics
In biology, evolution is change in the genetic material of a population of organisms from one generation to the next. Though the changes produced in any one generation are small, differences accumulate with each generation and can, over time, cause substantial changes in the organisms. This process can culminate in the emergence of new species.[1] Indeed, the similarities between organisms suggest that all known species are descended from a common ancestor (or ancestral gene pool) through this process of gradual divergence.(thanks to wiki)
A Man wearing a light brown leather jacket a dark brown beret, old weathered gloves and steal toed boots walks alone down what appears to be a dark dirt road in the middle of the desert and all he can hear is the soft lullaby of a near by grasshopper.
The stars shine brightly above "Jackie my old friend after this we can finally retire....ha..haha.....hahaha" Jackie looks down and sees a fence at the end of the road... Jackie stands there for only a moment "Here we go again!"
Jackie Takes off running full sprint towards the fence and with what seems to be with no struggle leaps over the fence in such a graceful action he takes his time to bow "I would like to thank my parents....nah fuck that I did all the work...ha..haha...hahahah". "Cricket" Jackie looks down at the grasshopper "Race ya!"
Jackie takes off with the quickness only seen on TV and in comic books. Jackie Quickly drops and lays next to a wall as two soldiers walk by not even noticing him. "Cricket" Jackie looks up at the wall and to what seems to be the same grasshopper but Jackie brushes off the idea "Man they have an infestation!"
Jackie Springs up and bolts for a near by ventilation shaft with some quick moves with a screwdriver the vent is off and Jackie is down the the shaft "was it 32 levels or 23 levels down that i am appose to set the bomb again?" Jackie fumbles with his jacket pocket when he drops a piece of paper with his instructions on it "FUCK" Jackie drops down the shaft fallowing the piece of paper "Cricket" Jackie looks up as he falls spotting the same grasshopper.
With a load crash Jackie lands on the 23 floor alerting the near by guards "HALT OR WILL SHOOT" Jackie bolts towards them and as they start firing Jackie bounces off the wall in to a round off and lands in to a spinning sweep kick knocking the guards off their balance Jackie quickly grabs both their guns throwing them in either direction then fallows up with a double axe kick flip in to both of the guards heads killing them instantly with a quick flip up hes continues his dash down the halls. "Animals testing, No! Cybernetics, NO!" After a frustrated search Jackie takes a deep breath "Damn it it must have been the 32 second floor" He rushes to the vent system and continues downward to the 32 floor.
Jackie Reaches in to his pocket and pulls out a small round explosive he sets the timer then looks down and on the vent looking in to floor 32 Jackie spots the same grasshopper "Well you might have beat me here, you wont beat me out!" Jackie throws the bomb aiming for the grasshopper and takes off.
By the time Jackie hit the 28th floor the explosion had gone off and the place was filling up with a strange red-electric mist "Cough! What the fuck is this!" Jackie frantically rushes to get out of the building CRB "Alert... Alert... Chemical Breach closing emergency vents" "Shit!" Jackie rushes for the vent as it is closing and begins to pry it open with his screwdriver "FUCK!" He begins slamming his fist in to the metal vents and the metal gives in and he rushes threw quickly to the next vent busting it open with his bare hands "AHHHHHHHH"
CRB "Activating shut down of full facility" Jackie's heart starts pumping rapidly as what seems to be inhuman crawling threw the vents after him Jackie tears threw the vent and throws it at the animalistic beast gains in velocity in his direction. A large explosion erupts from a lower floor and fills the shaft with even more red-electric mist.
CRB "Chemical breach from sector 4532 to 4528, Emergency vent closure malfunction" Jackie looks ahead and sees the vents are now stuck open again and he quickly makes a dash for the exit hen the pressure of the building throws him out of the vent, Jackie lands a few 100 feet from the vent entrance "Cough! Cough!" Jackie Rolls over Covered in the Red-electric mist he catches his breath "Ha! I did it" as he begins to walk away he sees that same grasshopper chirping away as it has all night "Now to finish this" Jackie quickly and with much force place and a large amount of pressure crushes the grasshopper but instead of crushing the grasshopper the grasshopper stays strong and busts right threw his boots and in to his foot where a strange combination with Jackie's blood and the red-electric mist Causes an unexpected side effect to the Grasshopper.
With an explosion of force lifting Jackie off the ground the grasshopper begins spinning Jackie in the air at such a rapid rate that it tears Jackie's leg off the Grasshopper then continues to beat Jackie to death with his own leg.
In the moment of self panic the grasshopper looks at him self and with a strange sense of ones self and realized he had just killed some one the grasshopper now stands 3 ft tall much like a human but some what bug appearance surrounded in a puddle of Jackie's blood he checks jack for any possible inclination of who he might be when he finds his drivers license... He longingly looks at the ID and sees that it is clearly Jackie "Ja..ck..ie" He begins to well up with tears and a strange glow surrounds the grasshopper "AHHHHH!!!!!" the Grasshopper takes Jackie's Jacket Boxers and hat and takes off in to the sky!
:POK I HOPE YOU LIKED IT!!!!!!! PLEASE BE CRITICAL OF MY WORK!!!!!!!!!! Now i did write this some time ago and you can see my orginal posting of this on my myspace. Here is the link to my blog blogs.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.ListAll&friendId=72397577
And here is just for my ...myspace
www.myspace.com/arcticpresence_evilsoul
Please Comment i would like to hear what you think(*Lex thinking*....ummm now i am nerves...umm should i go back and proof read.....ummm no leave that for a later date....ummm ok well).